Post by ~Luna~ on Nov 6, 2009 1:20:38 GMT -5
Character's Name // Sniper ( Nicknamed Snipe )
Age // 4 years
Breed // Unknown
Gender // Male
Alliance // Loner
Fur Colour // Black and brown
Eye Colour // Deep Brown
Appearance // {image} None, sorry.
Appearance details // {optional; for things like markings, scars, etc.} A large black dog, obviously a mix of many different kinds. The size of a german shepherd, with a powerful, muscled structure. The biggest of the Comandos. He has leather-brown paws and chest. The mark on his chest is shaped like a diamond, and branches up to his muzzle, coloring it. Snipe has two brown half-rings around his eyes, both rings not quite touching. Sniper definately has the thinest coat, and is short-haired, but has longer fur decorating his chest, curling out a bit more.
Sniper has a soelmn expression almost always wears a snarl. Sniper is more german shepherd than the other two, and doesn't have a tail. To the right of Sniper’s chest, halfway between his chest and his shoulder there is a burnt-in emblem. A crest that looks suspiciously like a police officer badge.
History //Sniper is brother two his two sisters, Major and Lieutenant and all three were born in the city. These siblings were raised well-trained and were trained to kill, and were all branded with a police badge. The gruesome part is that they were trained to kill their own kind. Sniper was raised with the highest expectations and reached them. He’s vigilant and ruthless. Though make no mistake, Sniper is never reckless. The most dangerous of the three, because he was trained a merciless killer. He didn’t have a problem staying in the city, but his sisters were sensible, and knew that a cold-blooded path would not be a good one. So they escaped together, and stuck together ever since.
Personality // {over 150 words please!} Be wise and considerate when approaching Sniper. Sniper is silent, but is like a ticking time bomb. He will dispose of any threats when necessary, without a single second thought. He can be reckless at times, but usually his aggression is kept in check by his sisters. Sniper is solemn and is cold on the outside, but has a surprising soft spot for his sisters. Snipe is protective of his sisters, and if anybody so much as looks at them funny, he goes bursting off. As his sisters put it, Snipe has a bullet-edge. Out of the Commandos, Sniper is definitely the metal man, or rather, metal dog, meaning he’s the muscles of the three.
Like his sisters have, those who learn to cope with Sniper can melt his snide and cynical shell. He’s truly a kind soul, if a bit silent. But loyal as the word itself, and boundlessly courageous. A true soldier, willing to do almost anything for the things he loves.
First Post // Sniper yawned, exposing his long fangs and well sharpened teeth. Sniper stretched and only looked around to see his sisters snoozing. You never knew with Lou, she always seemed to know something. Snipe liked looking at his sisters. They seemed so peaceful in their sleep. He wondered if he looked like that when he was asleep himself. He couldn’t quite imagine though. He sighed and laid down again, nestling in closer to his dear sisters this time, and fell asleep in the mass of warm fur.
How did you find us? // {you only have to fill this out once XD} By a banner-like on NotE. X3
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Character's Name // Lieutenant ( Nicknamed Lou or Louie. )
Age // 4 years
Breed // Unknown
Gender // Female
Alliance // Loner
Fur Colour // Silver-white
Eye Colour // Blue
Appearance // {image} None, sorry.
Appearance details // Lou looks exactly like her grandmother, and has a silver-grey pelt, with a white underbelly, muzzle, paws, and undertail. Lou has a feathered tail, and is slightly curled at the tip. Lou is much more lithe than Major, but still has muscle hidden under her fur. And on Lou, there's an identical emblem which Sniper and Major both have. On Lou's right cheek, there's the trademark badge that all of the Commandos have.
History //Lou's memories of the city were the worst. The other two got branded in spots that weren't so painful. But poor Lou was branded on her cheek. Lou and Major were mistreated, and Lou, was considered the runt of the litter, being slightly smaller than Majors. Lou never hated humans, because she knew that they weren’t all bad. She knew very well that some were very kind, but Lou couldn’t help but hate her trainer. An evil wretch, who overworked Lou until she collapsed.
Personality //Lou is vigilant, and silent, and not nearly as furious as Sniper. She’s tactical, and knows how emotions work. She’s very mellow, but stands up for herself. She’s fast, and knows exactly where to strike. Lou is very understanding, and is always sympathetic. Lou always seems to know something. Lou is the second oldest of the Commandos, and is undoubtedly the fastest and the smartest. Lou is watchful and loves her siblings, and is like the peace keeper, always extinguishing fights between Majors and Snipe. Lou’s wise, cool, deep blue eyes are like her personality. Lou doesn’t have a temper like Sniper, but when angered, her eyes become dagger-like, and just generally seems to become an increasing threat. Not to be underestimated at any time. Lieutenant always seems to keep her cool, even in the most stressful of situations. Not rash or reckless, and not laid-back. Lou keeps Majors and Sniper in check, and always makes sure they never go overboard.
First Post // Lieutenant sighed. Sniper and Major were having a fight again. They had been fighting whether or not to join a pack. Sniper, being stubborn and fairly solitary, he had obviously said no. Major had been slightly more optimistic. Though Major knew that they couldn’t join a pack, Major had decided to be stubborn. Therefore, sides clashed. Lou decided to start with Sniper. Lou trotted to a cove of thistles, where she scented her brother. She called. Sniper growled. ”Sniper, you know Major. Get over it.”, she said. Sniper arose, face solemn. Sniper followed Lou to the oak tree, their meeting place. “Wait here,” she sighed, and then trotted off, following Major’s scent. She was beneath a pine tree, sulking. ”It was a good idea, but you know it’d never work” , Lou frowned. Major shrugged. Lieutenant looked her straight in the eyes. “Major. We don’t do well in groups. It’d never work. It’s a sin we all have to bear. We just have to stick together.” Lou recited. Major smiled. “You’re right.” She said. And slowly rose to her feet, grateful for her sister’s wise attitude. The two returned to the oak, and Sniper was already there, waiting. He said nothing, but gave an apologetic nod. Major nodded back.
And so, the threesome continued again, racing through the forest in a practiced, synchronized formation, every paw landing at the exact same time, in perfect rhythm.
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Character's Name // Major ( Nicknamed Majors or Mage. )
Age // 4 years
Breed // Unknown
Gender // Female
Alliance // Loner
Fur Colour //
Eye Colour // Amber
Appearance // {image} None, sorry.
Appearance details // Major looks like Lou, but a soft autumn brown, with a rounder face, and unlike the other two, has floppy ears. She has a white underbelly, paws, muzzle and under tail. Once again, Major has another trait that makes it hard to believe Lou, Sniper, and Major could possibly be related. Major has a curled tail that wrings over her back. Major has a build like Sniper’s. Muscled, but still has that feminine sleekness that she shares with Lieutenant. On Major’s right ear, there’s the branded police badge trademark that all of the Commandos have. Unlike the other two, Mage felt no pain, since she has no nerves in her ears.
History // As you probably know by heart now, Mage, Sniper, and Lou escaped from the city, after enduring incredibly harsh training to kill their own kind and protect humans. They ran free, having a bond too closely woven together to even think about joining a pack. So they stuck together, growing strong together.
Personality // Mage has a temper like Sniper’s, but much more maintained and controlled. She’s stubborn, but she also has a good side too. She’s the friendliest of the Commandos, and usually has a good attitude about most things. She’s very optimistic and sweet. A bit more naïve than the other two and a bit like a pup with the power of a mini-bulldozer. Majors like humans the most, because her training wasn’t as cruel as the other two’s. Mage has very simplistic and understandable emotions. Majors has a little more respect for packs than her siblings, and keeps an optimistic and open mind about possibly joining a pack one day.( HINT HINT ) Though Majors isn’t all smiles. Like Lou and Snipe, Mage has her own military-attitude. When it’s time to get serious, she’s very obedient and glares at her enemies, with that same semi-juvenile attitude that she has. Major is slightly defiant when it comes to being accused of being bossy or stubborn.
First Post // Mage was running with her siblings along a river. They took a breathing break after a while, and she saw Lou sitting by the river. Mage saw her chance, and barreled into Lou headfirst, knocking her into the river. Then she felt a force knock her into the river and hit the water gently. Sniper was on the shore, laughing. Lou and Mage looked at each other, and a simple moment of understanding passed between them. They simultaneously grabbed one of Sniper’s legs and dragged him in. Soon they were all wet and laughing together. They splashed the entire afternoon away, with not a care in the world.
Age // 4 years
Breed // Unknown
Gender // Male
Alliance // Loner
Fur Colour // Black and brown
Eye Colour // Deep Brown
Appearance // {image} None, sorry.
Appearance details // {optional; for things like markings, scars, etc.} A large black dog, obviously a mix of many different kinds. The size of a german shepherd, with a powerful, muscled structure. The biggest of the Comandos. He has leather-brown paws and chest. The mark on his chest is shaped like a diamond, and branches up to his muzzle, coloring it. Snipe has two brown half-rings around his eyes, both rings not quite touching. Sniper definately has the thinest coat, and is short-haired, but has longer fur decorating his chest, curling out a bit more.
Sniper has a soelmn expression almost always wears a snarl. Sniper is more german shepherd than the other two, and doesn't have a tail. To the right of Sniper’s chest, halfway between his chest and his shoulder there is a burnt-in emblem. A crest that looks suspiciously like a police officer badge.
History //Sniper is brother two his two sisters, Major and Lieutenant and all three were born in the city. These siblings were raised well-trained and were trained to kill, and were all branded with a police badge. The gruesome part is that they were trained to kill their own kind. Sniper was raised with the highest expectations and reached them. He’s vigilant and ruthless. Though make no mistake, Sniper is never reckless. The most dangerous of the three, because he was trained a merciless killer. He didn’t have a problem staying in the city, but his sisters were sensible, and knew that a cold-blooded path would not be a good one. So they escaped together, and stuck together ever since.
Personality // {over 150 words please!} Be wise and considerate when approaching Sniper. Sniper is silent, but is like a ticking time bomb. He will dispose of any threats when necessary, without a single second thought. He can be reckless at times, but usually his aggression is kept in check by his sisters. Sniper is solemn and is cold on the outside, but has a surprising soft spot for his sisters. Snipe is protective of his sisters, and if anybody so much as looks at them funny, he goes bursting off. As his sisters put it, Snipe has a bullet-edge. Out of the Commandos, Sniper is definitely the metal man, or rather, metal dog, meaning he’s the muscles of the three.
Like his sisters have, those who learn to cope with Sniper can melt his snide and cynical shell. He’s truly a kind soul, if a bit silent. But loyal as the word itself, and boundlessly courageous. A true soldier, willing to do almost anything for the things he loves.
First Post // Sniper yawned, exposing his long fangs and well sharpened teeth. Sniper stretched and only looked around to see his sisters snoozing. You never knew with Lou, she always seemed to know something. Snipe liked looking at his sisters. They seemed so peaceful in their sleep. He wondered if he looked like that when he was asleep himself. He couldn’t quite imagine though. He sighed and laid down again, nestling in closer to his dear sisters this time, and fell asleep in the mass of warm fur.
How did you find us? // {you only have to fill this out once XD} By a banner-like on NotE. X3
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Character's Name // Lieutenant ( Nicknamed Lou or Louie. )
Age // 4 years
Breed // Unknown
Gender // Female
Alliance // Loner
Fur Colour // Silver-white
Eye Colour // Blue
Appearance // {image} None, sorry.
Appearance details // Lou looks exactly like her grandmother, and has a silver-grey pelt, with a white underbelly, muzzle, paws, and undertail. Lou has a feathered tail, and is slightly curled at the tip. Lou is much more lithe than Major, but still has muscle hidden under her fur. And on Lou, there's an identical emblem which Sniper and Major both have. On Lou's right cheek, there's the trademark badge that all of the Commandos have.
History //Lou's memories of the city were the worst. The other two got branded in spots that weren't so painful. But poor Lou was branded on her cheek. Lou and Major were mistreated, and Lou, was considered the runt of the litter, being slightly smaller than Majors. Lou never hated humans, because she knew that they weren’t all bad. She knew very well that some were very kind, but Lou couldn’t help but hate her trainer. An evil wretch, who overworked Lou until she collapsed.
Personality //Lou is vigilant, and silent, and not nearly as furious as Sniper. She’s tactical, and knows how emotions work. She’s very mellow, but stands up for herself. She’s fast, and knows exactly where to strike. Lou is very understanding, and is always sympathetic. Lou always seems to know something. Lou is the second oldest of the Commandos, and is undoubtedly the fastest and the smartest. Lou is watchful and loves her siblings, and is like the peace keeper, always extinguishing fights between Majors and Snipe. Lou’s wise, cool, deep blue eyes are like her personality. Lou doesn’t have a temper like Sniper, but when angered, her eyes become dagger-like, and just generally seems to become an increasing threat. Not to be underestimated at any time. Lieutenant always seems to keep her cool, even in the most stressful of situations. Not rash or reckless, and not laid-back. Lou keeps Majors and Sniper in check, and always makes sure they never go overboard.
First Post // Lieutenant sighed. Sniper and Major were having a fight again. They had been fighting whether or not to join a pack. Sniper, being stubborn and fairly solitary, he had obviously said no. Major had been slightly more optimistic. Though Major knew that they couldn’t join a pack, Major had decided to be stubborn. Therefore, sides clashed. Lou decided to start with Sniper. Lou trotted to a cove of thistles, where she scented her brother. She called. Sniper growled. ”Sniper, you know Major. Get over it.”, she said. Sniper arose, face solemn. Sniper followed Lou to the oak tree, their meeting place. “Wait here,” she sighed, and then trotted off, following Major’s scent. She was beneath a pine tree, sulking. ”It was a good idea, but you know it’d never work” , Lou frowned. Major shrugged. Lieutenant looked her straight in the eyes. “Major. We don’t do well in groups. It’d never work. It’s a sin we all have to bear. We just have to stick together.” Lou recited. Major smiled. “You’re right.” She said. And slowly rose to her feet, grateful for her sister’s wise attitude. The two returned to the oak, and Sniper was already there, waiting. He said nothing, but gave an apologetic nod. Major nodded back.
And so, the threesome continued again, racing through the forest in a practiced, synchronized formation, every paw landing at the exact same time, in perfect rhythm.
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Character's Name // Major ( Nicknamed Majors or Mage. )
Age // 4 years
Breed // Unknown
Gender // Female
Alliance // Loner
Fur Colour //
Eye Colour // Amber
Appearance // {image} None, sorry.
Appearance details // Major looks like Lou, but a soft autumn brown, with a rounder face, and unlike the other two, has floppy ears. She has a white underbelly, paws, muzzle and under tail. Once again, Major has another trait that makes it hard to believe Lou, Sniper, and Major could possibly be related. Major has a curled tail that wrings over her back. Major has a build like Sniper’s. Muscled, but still has that feminine sleekness that she shares with Lieutenant. On Major’s right ear, there’s the branded police badge trademark that all of the Commandos have. Unlike the other two, Mage felt no pain, since she has no nerves in her ears.
History // As you probably know by heart now, Mage, Sniper, and Lou escaped from the city, after enduring incredibly harsh training to kill their own kind and protect humans. They ran free, having a bond too closely woven together to even think about joining a pack. So they stuck together, growing strong together.
Personality // Mage has a temper like Sniper’s, but much more maintained and controlled. She’s stubborn, but she also has a good side too. She’s the friendliest of the Commandos, and usually has a good attitude about most things. She’s very optimistic and sweet. A bit more naïve than the other two and a bit like a pup with the power of a mini-bulldozer. Majors like humans the most, because her training wasn’t as cruel as the other two’s. Mage has very simplistic and understandable emotions. Majors has a little more respect for packs than her siblings, and keeps an optimistic and open mind about possibly joining a pack one day.( HINT HINT ) Though Majors isn’t all smiles. Like Lou and Snipe, Mage has her own military-attitude. When it’s time to get serious, she’s very obedient and glares at her enemies, with that same semi-juvenile attitude that she has. Major is slightly defiant when it comes to being accused of being bossy or stubborn.
First Post // Mage was running with her siblings along a river. They took a breathing break after a while, and she saw Lou sitting by the river. Mage saw her chance, and barreled into Lou headfirst, knocking her into the river. Then she felt a force knock her into the river and hit the water gently. Sniper was on the shore, laughing. Lou and Mage looked at each other, and a simple moment of understanding passed between them. They simultaneously grabbed one of Sniper’s legs and dragged him in. Soon they were all wet and laughing together. They splashed the entire afternoon away, with not a care in the world.
